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A total n00b that will never rise in the ranks of the Newgrounds community...
Newgrounds Stats
Whistle Status: Garbage
Exp. Points: 660 / 710
Exp. Rank #: 45,056
Voting Pow.: 5.05 votes
BBS Posts: 3 (0.03 per day)
Flash Reviews: 171
Music Reviews: 14
Trophies: 0
Stickers: 0
Latest Flash Reviews
The screen is tiny. You did a nice job emulating a practical setting.
The song went well with the animation.
Even though you SAY it is short, it's too short, and making it faster paced and longer would be better. It seems like they're moving in slow motion the entire movie. You're gonna need to keep the same quality, but put in even more frames and make it longer.
Reiterate-Faster, Keep the good quality, make it longer.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the positive criticism, my next one will be bigger, and longer, all I need is some kind of idea.
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Some tips-Try to develop at least a rudimentary storyline, because as of now, you just have some guy on a flat plain shooting into the ground for no reason, and then getting owned by some guy that's a different color.
As of now, there is not enough filler action. Try to make them combat a little more Kung-fu style and THEN have one of them dominate. If one of them just wins through the whole thing, it becomes quite boring.
You didn't associate us with either one in particular. We don't know which one is the hero.
And I dislike the completely bland and flat battleground.
All in all, While this is decent, and definitely suitable to newgrounds, you need a LOT more effort and time to make people like your work.
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THAT was the most satisfying Customize your_____ game I've played in a long time. I'm generally pushed away from the my the fact that they are USUALLY drag and drop Crap-fests.
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Latest Audio Reviews
This looks best while using AngryFaic visualizer.
Thanks for making this, It's is a very good addition to your already formidable collection of music.
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I didn't know this was was a loop untill th guy a few reviews down said so...It was well mixed, though!
Author's Response:
Thanks, they do sound pretty good huh?
-Pants
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This is a nice song, I can only reccomend that you use Corona when visualizing this song.
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